Marxs2781's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[ghost rider]

Cool character concept :) I suppose she would need some kind of stylized 'bad chick' bicycle of the Harley Davidson make (or similar). In some way she may be like a 'good girl' who looks mean and dangerous etc. Interesting choice of footing - the way she is standing is very feminine but be careful with it as a really powerful swing her chain would require a different stance (more of an idea than a criticism - she still looks sexy of course).

Some color would make it whole - but that comes later I know! ~ Great work!.

immaboreddude responds:

That's true, the drawing looks like she is posing for a magazine cover.

[Victorian pokemon Trainer]

This could make for highly interesting steam-punk Pokemon. Maybe even 'extinct' Pokemon from that period because they were hunted too much. Scary thoughts.

immaboreddude responds:

a bit too scary tbh XD, just look to some of the actual pokemon attributes, the pokemon world is a dangerous place to live, imagine all that without the modern world regulations and knowledge.

[Swollen]

Ok - this one reminds a little bit of an alien species from Bungie's Halo series? I'm sure I don't need to say which ones - but always creepy and tends to stick to one's memory. Can be beautifully interwoven into a story!

immaboreddude responds:

That's the plan XD, I just hope to make them an interesting creature to fight against or work with?

[Angular]

Very cool indeed! Like some type of powerful robot with nice attributes - your artwork really tells the rest. With color it will look even more fantastic.

immaboreddude responds:

Yeah, I should add color to some of these drawings, I think I can make something interesting out of this. XD

[La centella street]

Really wonderful work! It's super cool to see the final product. I would imagine something like this would take more than 2 days actually ! The colors are fantastic - the focal point is obvious, but I really appreciate the background city design. If we look a little closer we notice this is probably a shady part of town - the one that gives rise to some of the best stories :) 5/5.

immaboreddude responds:

To be honest my stories are trash, but I'll love to make a web comic with this art style just for fun, ( that's what I was experimenting with this drawing).

[Blarggette]

Well this is interesting! A little unusual that it's not what I call 'pixel art' but its no surprise at all that you have fantastic drawing skills... Peach + Bowser + Star powerup? I don't know who that is, but I see how it can be scary for kids; (I would even say she looks attractive now!) ^^ Thanks for sharing!

ScepterDPinoy responds:

No problem. Just to let you know this is based on Peach fusing with Yoshi Story Blargg super crown hybrid.

[Gato Roboto Stereoscopic mockup]

I don't know much about the game but this piece is great. I didn't know your boredom was so precise and detailed. Feels almost like it isn't pure black and white ? (and all the shades of grey of course!)... Not much more to say but it feels cool and I suppose I would want to play a space-cat/robot/metroid :) Thanks for this!

ScepterDPinoy responds:

No problem.

[succubus]

I would say that your attempt has certainly been successful here. Not my favorite type of character but wonderfully well done details on the horns - mesmerizing indeed. As pure artwork 5/5... Once again I like how you blended your colors, and I do notice some blurring near the knees. I suppose there are different body types to consider as well, so this character may very well look this way! Feels like it's not her final form either (I see her with scary wings and a more menacing spiky tail?) Keep up the great work ^.^

immaboreddude responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it XD

[Paz the restless fox (WIP)]

I'd say this is effectively complete - taking on previous comments on lighting (I'd also say 'bloom' effects or 'glow' as well). Nothing much to fix. It is a cartoon and obviously her eyes are a little larger(?) So if you are looking for some room for improvement I'd be mindful about eye-sizing; that's honestly just finding a needle in a haystack since I can't find two. Speaking of which, I'd also say you have chosen a lovely eye-color to go with it.. So a really nice drawing overall, well deserving of 5/5. It it clear to me this has taken a long time.

immaboreddude responds:

Thanks for letting me know, I'm going to be more careful with eye-size next time.

[Distraction (animation test #3)]

Great work! Distracting indeed. I like the colors and can certainly appreciate the use of shading and reflections. If I need to get picky, the colors feel a bit flat (like early 2000's flash animations)? Perhaps I used the wrong terminology... maybe softer colors or use of glow? This may allow the colors to blend more subtly. Otherwise fantastic drawing and backgrounds :)

immaboreddude responds:

I was going for a retro look so an early 2000's flash animations is a good comparison XD, but still adding a glow effect is a good idea, I think I can do it.