Marxs2781's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wargroove pixel fan art]

Wonderful work! Really like you included plenty of subtle shading for a smooth finish (particularly blends nicely into the backgrounds) Thank you for the update ^^ Wishing you a successful year ahead !

ScepterDPinoy responds:

You too.

[kato]

Practice makes perfect :) Not sure who the character is, but amazing work nonetheless !

RodneyAmirebrahimi responds:

Steampunk Kato :D

[My Body is Ready]

Oh wow -- this is very relevant - I do get the quote but the robot beats me. Fantastic work though - yes we all need to have our body ready for the challenges of daily life (that's all I will say - pun maybe a little-bit intended) :D

ScepterDPinoy responds:

That's no robot. That's a living creature (Pokemon.)
Also good advice!

[Valentines pixel sprite and some shit...]

Amazing work - hard to believe it was done in 5 hours! Good thing too - Hope yo enjoyed the remainder of Valentines Day ^^ ... Thanks 4 sharing the love dude

ScepterDPinoy responds:

No problem! You too.

[Night Walk.]

The creating from page 3 took us here... and its a sight to behold! I'll skip the obvious and get to the details ~ I like the rain effect, it certainly adds to a 'heavier' atmosphere - reminds of those nights I don't really want to be outside xD (but watching other people do it is great!).. The laser pointers must belong to some kind rifle held by the authorities (or assassins?) Love the jacket design and symbol on her robotic (I am presuming) arm. I also notice hte use of white outline (glow) on the right side, really neat touch. Finally - I think the body is basically proportionally drawn (so great work there!). I am sure you will get some butt and thighs comments too ~ Great introductory page anyway! 5/5

immaboreddude responds:

I'm still working on page 4, but you got it right she is one of the main character of the story. The laser sights belong to the members of a rival gang that controls that district (a cyberpunk clown themed gang, called "Pantomim") I'll introduce them later in the comic. XD

[LaserStar page 3]

Oh wow this is really cool :) I'm not so sure if it messes with my head but it certainly has that potential (which I think is partially the point here). Really like the finished page here...and that includes the experimental design. Very scary (blank and cold) facial expression, and I do like the hair; very nice flow. Great choice for color blending too - purple-red - goes with a dystopian sci-fi. I want to know where the creating is going to take is on page four :) Thanks for this and keep up your great work!

immaboreddude responds:

Glad you like it :) I need to make page 4 really explosive, like turning the page to a big reveal.

[LaserStar page #2]

I really like the experimental panels. Certainly captures interest; I wan't to know why the patterns break. Show us the fault in the system and take us deeper. Something is wrong here... The eyes tell it all! Love it so far :D

immaboreddude responds:

There's nothing wrong here, it is just a dream, I don't want to explain it because it will ruin the fun, but isn't it kinda weird that, when you are dreaming, you can never make up the faces of the people in the dream, or maybe it is just me XD

[Gen3515 LaserStar #1]

Very cool first page -- the distorted city backdrop is confusing and intriguing at the same time. Feels like the beginning of a cyber-punk or maybe 'supernatural' theme for sure. Excellent use of warm colors too/blending with the blue-ish 'nigh-sky'. Love it so far ! Excellent work.

immaboreddude responds:

Thanks, I'm tryingmy best not to make the dialog too edgy, I mean, like yeah it is still edgy, but on an acceptable level. kind of hard to achieve when english isn't your first language.

[I need to step my shit up]

Doesn't suck at all, just looks unfinished when compared to your previous stuff ~ Looks like something you can definitely put into a comic book (and I would love to read something like that too!) Thanks for sharing ~

immaboreddude responds:

I know, I was stuck for a while and didn't know what to draw, I just needed to chill and take my time. Think of this as a WIP.

[breakable.]

Interesting idea with the Unicorn? I have no idea about the context but I like the drawing. Can't help but notice the natural looking butt - not so easy to get it right when drawing - I like how you captured curvature/muscles etc. I like the horn idea on a character - makes them look magical or powerful :)

immaboreddude responds:

Thanks! The idea behind this was that thegirls/oni were training and the one on the left broke her horn by accident, and the girl on the right is helping her out, the scene is a bit basic but it fits the breakable theme. :)